Review Detail of Devon_Morgenstern in Death And Rebirth

Item: Death And Rebirth
Rating: 3.4

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Devon_MorgensternLv152yrDevon_Morgenstern

has potential but definetly need to reread before posting, its not so much the grammar but more like calling the mc she/her all the time and I'm starting to think the mc is suppose to be a woman and not a man.

Death And Rebirth

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I know, it's a mistake I won't make again in the next chapters, I haven't had much time to write so I miss these little details. By the time I come back I'll have more free time and I'll be able to fix these little details.

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Devon_MorgensternLv15Devon_Morgenstern

a quick reread will definetly help out before you post, its not a huge deal especially since its in the beginning of your novel but if it continued for 20+ chapters it would definetly effect the novel overall

Translate_Kun:I know, it's a mistake I won't make again in the next chapters, I haven't had much time to write so I miss these little details. By the time I come back I'll have more free time and I'll be able to fix these little details.

2yr