Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in [Dropped for now] - Rise of the Yokai Lord

It's still early in the story, but I'm already in love. Two chapters in and the world-building have been shown at a nice, easy to follow, flow. The first chapter did a good job of capturing Oda the human and the pressures he was dealing with. It will be interesting to see how Oda the yokai develops. Love the Japanese myths in the story, I'm always a sucker for myths. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read what comes next in his journey.