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After binge reading to the end of it, I have to change the 5 star review I gave when I was at 200's. This has gone downhil so much. Cringe character interractions, unnecessary dragging, plot not progressing etc. Very disappointed overall. It was going great but last 200 chaps are very below average and honestly bad imo.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

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Good reply after deleting 3 of your previous replies. I guess since you can't produce a decent reply, using images fits you better. Also I am surprised you stopped personally attacking me and just posted a reply that shows that you don't care what I write and find them stupid. This is a decent character development for you, unfortunately that development doesn't exist in your book.

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I read your book, pretty bad to be honest. You're quite shameless to say something bad about My book with that trash of yours. Improve yourself first and then come back

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I know my book was trash. And I just wrote it casually for fun, it is not like I am a proffesional or anything. I just wrote 3 chapters and realised it was bad and dropped on my own. That being said, my book being trash doesn't change the fact that this book just goes downhil after 200ish chapters and is just a trash wuxia copy-paste with no character development. İnstead of humiliating other people just focus on improving your own book. My writing being trash doesn't automatically makes your writing good. You just reading the 3 chapters I wrote and attacking me just shows your lack of character as a writer. İn webnovel most writers are newbies or just bad at writing anyways. You on the other hand are a contracted writer that wrote hundreds of chapters and let me tell you this: you are not improving. The story started great and I gave 5 stars at first. And then it got worse and worse and after all that filler content with no development it is utter garbage. Yeah, I know the 3 chapters I wrote is garbage but that doesn't immediately make you a great writer or excuse your going downhil story. İn short, I indeed need to improve my writing but I advise you to improve your character, first. Because with this personality you will always go backwards never forward.

XIETIAN:I read your book, pretty bad to be honest. You're quite shameless to say something bad about My book with that trash of yours. Improve yourself first and then come back
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Lol. Humiliating again. Do you think being a webnovel writer is my life? Do you think just because I wrote 3 bad chapters my life is a joke? I have a pretty good job with a decent income. I just wrote some chapters for fun. Unlike you my life doesn't revolve around getting a rank at webnovel. And being Top 1 doesn't change the fact that your writing is bad. All those chapters and 0 development. You can be ignorant as you want, but compared to proffessional writers that publish their books your writing is garbage. You can at most be a webnovel writer with a toxic fanbase with that attitue of yours, nothing more or nothing less. So, I think you are the clown instead. İf you publish your book in real copies, let's just watch how real fantasy critics react to your book. Compared to real fantasy stories and 'real' authors that developed themselves and improved you are just a joke. And I became sure now taht I see your attidute, even if you write a million more hours your writing will just stay the same without improving. You will never be able write a decent fantasy series like Lord of the Rings or Game Of Thrones series. With that attidute of yours you are doomed to stay as a webnovel writer that slaves his hours to write a trash story for a toxic fandom. Have fun writing another 1000 chapters of wuxia garbage.

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Nc_sdsf:Lol. Humiliating again. Do you think being a webnovel writer is my life? Do you think just because I wrote 3 bad chapters my life is a joke? I have a pretty good job with a decent income. I just wrote some chapters for fun. Unlike you my life doesn't revolve around getting a rank at webnovel. And being Top 1 doesn't change the fact that your writing is bad. All those chapters and 0 development. You can be ignorant as you want, but compared to proffessional writers that publish their books your writing is garbage. You can at most be a webnovel writer with a toxic fanbase with that attitue of yours, nothing more or nothing less. So, I think you are the clown instead. İf you publish your book in real copies, let's just watch how real fantasy critics react to your book. Compared to real fantasy stories and 'real' authors that developed themselves and improved you are just a joke. And I became sure now taht I see your attidute, even if you write a million more hours your writing will just stay the same without improving. You will never be able write a decent fantasy series like Lord of the Rings or Game Of Thrones series. With that attidute of yours you are doomed to stay as a webnovel writer that slaves his hours to write a trash story for a toxic fandom. Have fun writing another 1000 chapters of wuxia garbage.
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Nc_sdsf:Good reply after deleting 3 of your previous replies. I guess since you can't produce a decent reply, using images fits you better. Also I am surprised you stopped personally attacking me and just posted a reply that shows that you don't care what I write and find them stupid. This is a decent character development for you, unfortunately that development doesn't exist in your book.
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