The writing could use some refining and refurbishing. It has some interesting concepts and ideas but the way they are presented can be improved. The stability of updates is just what you could expect from the impression this novel is giving off. Not very regular or stable. The author might pop off somewhere for 2 months randomly if he/she's feeling lie it. Well, that's the case for most of the fanfics out there under 50 chapters. I'd recommend using filtering out items with <50 chapters. I'd usually filter the novels with <100 chapters but I was pretty bored so I lowered it to <50. All in all, a pretty interesting read but not really satisfying.
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Liked it!
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!