Writing is great with very minimal errors. While I do love the nods and inspirations of different influences I will say some of it seemed a tad excessive. Story develops quickly, but not enough for you to be overwhelmed. Characters are getting fleshed out. There is thought behind them. It's great and I hope to continue reading when you finish launching.
Zexekiel
Liked it!
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!