Review Detail of Tina_Boshoff in Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline

I LIKE IT. This book so far is well written and and interesting. The thing about adventure stories are that they tend to throw you with a lot of information at once. A lot of characters introductions quickly. What I do like about this story is that it's fast paced and that things happen the whole time. Hope you keep writing and finish the story. That's what matters most. One thing I would recommend is that you go back and separate the characters "speech" sentences with at least two line spaces. Don't try to put a conversation with multiple people in one paragraph. But I'm adding to my library to see where this goes.