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Item: Kryptonian queen in Marvel
Rating: 2.8

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AxesLv53yrAxes

The grammar is terrible. It is hard to follow, The mc is a guy who asks to be a girl with a retractable Slong, the gods feel extremely weird.

Kryptonian queen in Marvel

amnesiak_13

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amnesiak_13作者amnesiak_13

It is writing in the synopsis now for futures peoples. Pity you just read the 500 words of the first chapter, that I wanted to re-write anyway because I didn't find it good too..

3yr

amnesiak_13作者amnesiak_13

Yeah maybe I should have specify for those like you, that it is the first time I wrote something, that I'm not English and absolutely not a author qualified, with a review like this, I didn't understand why you have continued to read maybe you are a M, thank for the cheer!

3yr

AxesLv5Axes

I have not continued to read, I just posted a review so other people who do not like stories with sketchy grammar do not waste their time. Just work on your grammar and you will have a good story.

amnesiak_13:Yeah maybe I should have specify for those like you, that it is the first time I wrote something, that I'm not English and absolutely not a author qualified, with a review like this, I didn't understand why you have continued to read maybe you are a M, thank for the cheer!

3yr

AxesLv5Axes

I read 5 chapters🤨

amnesiak_13:It is writing in the synopsis now for futures peoples. Pity you just read the 500 words of the first chapter, that I wanted to re-write anyway because I didn't find it good too..

3yr

KumThroneLv2KumThrone

This author seems abit... dense in understanding, Fellow reader.

Axes:I read 5 chapters🤨

3yr