The grammar is terrible. It is hard to follow, The mc is a guy who asks to be a girl with a retractable Slong, the gods feel extremely weird.
amnesiak_13
3の人に「いいね!」しました
いいねI have not continued to read, I just posted a review so other people who do not like stories with sketchy grammar do not waste their time. Just work on your grammar and you will have a good story.
amnesiak_13:Yeah maybe I should have specify for those like you, that it is the first time I wrote something, that I'm not English and absolutely not a author qualified, with a review like this, I didn't understand why you have continued to read maybe you are a M, thank for the cheer!
amnesiak_13:It is writing in the synopsis now for futures peoples. Pity you just read the 500 words of the first chapter, that I wanted to re-write anyway because I didn't find it good too..