Review Detail of Minxs in War Queen

Well done! There is no serious critique here. I mean the usual grammar mistakes and that's about it. Great job using 3rd person for the intro and switching to first. Really sets the tone of the story and portrays a beautiful world before letting the reader connect closely with the MC. I definitely see an interesting story premise here that has a lot of potential. My only knock is how a minor god of calamity knew about her, but the others did not. But I guess that would be explained later ;). Amazing story, wish you the best author!