Really good story, even though its a translation. Nice update stability too, but I'd probably like it better if you were to sacrifice Update stability on the grammer. When I read it I had no idea what was going on with the grammer, but I can tell it was a interesting plot. Can you please put some time in the translating?
marcodrakonian
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