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not bad... the grammars are ok but the way you write is not that good... so many time skips but it's ok as i can see you're trying to make it as fast as possible to the canon i understand good job your story has potential and keep writing, try reading other fics so you can learn from them and how they write thats all thanks for making this fanfic.
legend of white eye douluo
Miliyant
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Miliyant:thank you for appreciation and your suggestion, i will work hard and try to improve my writing skill next. and also thank for your support.[img=recommend]