Review Detail of Miliyant in legend of white eye douluo

May you use grammerly or something similar to fix the punctuation and grammer mistakes please? Other than that, I honestly think that this novel is good. thx.

harem?

do you want an editor?

I can help you edit this fanfic if you want. It can also help me improve my skills in the English language..

I hope that you'll continue this fanfic story with more chapters. I'm also an avid fan of DD (espcecially its fanfic stories) and your story is very interesting. I loved it😊

Hi, don't know If you are already thinking about the Eight Spirit Ring, but if you are, there is one attack of Neji called Eight Gates Crumbling Attack( its from a game) i read the information in the Wiki of Naruto and it appeared to be pretty cool. Keep up the good work!!