May you use grammerly or something similar to fix the punctuation and grammer mistakes please? Other than that, I honestly think that this novel is good. thx.
I hope that you'll continue this fanfic story with more chapters. I'm also an avid fan of DD (espcecially its fanfic stories) and your story is very interesting. I loved itð
Hi, don't know If you are already thinking about the Eight Spirit Ring, but if you are, there is one attack of Neji called Eight Gates Crumbling Attack( its from a game) i read the information in the Wiki of Naruto and it appeared to be pretty cool.
Keep up the good work!!