Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there it was really well written. It has a story I find interesting and I hope it does well.
Rude_Ana
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I recommend using grammarly, its free and helps a lot. It catches all the mistakes for you.
Rude_Ana:Thank you so much! I will try to read everything and correct any error I find ❤
Thank you so much! I will try to read everything and correct any error I find ❤
