Review Detail of UnknownsLegacy in Dragon King's Rise(Paused)

Item: Dragon King's Rise(Paused)
Rating: 5

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UnknownsLegacy作者3yrUnknownsLegacy

Hello, author here, I am not really one to ignore ideas so I am here to ask you guys if you feel like i am progressing too fast, forgetting something, giving mc too much skills or so, please do say so.

Dragon King's Rise(Paused)

UnknownsLegacy

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Slayerlb07Lv4Slayerlb07

I love the story but I think you could slow it down a little I mean he was just born and he at some elven village but otherwise it great

3yr