Review Detail of As2o3 in Titanomachy

Hello, The author here. The story starts slow and the MC disappears for a few chapters. That might discourage some of you to continue reading. I have a lot of flaws as a writer as this is my first work but I believe I will improve and so will the story and of course, the most relevant characters. along with it. Please stick with the story, there might be a few moments that make up for all the flaws the story might have. Please help me Improve.