Review Detail of MillionaireDaoist in AMELIA, Duchess of House Florence
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Love the way this is written. Its pretty detailed and the characters have depth. Though I wish the chapters were shorter, the beginning is quite long and the paragraphs are chunky, so it takes some time to get into. Otherwise everything else is pretty good ð
AMELIA, Duchess of House Florence
MICHIKOMIYU
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Thank you for this! I appreciate you taking the time to read it â€ïž I love reading old literature, so i somewhat adapted the sort of traditional writing style (and have been told like so a lot of times) with lengthy chapters and mouthful of descriptions. i thought that if i divide it, I'd be well on my way past 60chaps, but i can't get myself to shorten them ð i admit that it needs a little time for the story to sink into the reader since its rather slow-paced. So i hope that whoever reads it would have the patience to be with the characters through their journey â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž
I love old literature too, its okay ð it wasn't meant as criticism. I'm just telling you what books here tend to do. Believe it or not, 60+ would be good (I know its the same content and it sounds silly) ð§ but you do attract more readers with more chapters. But as the author you should do whatever feels right for you, I'll keep reading anyway ð¥°
MICHIKOMIYU:Thank you for this! I appreciate you taking the time to read it â€ïž I love reading old literature, so i somewhat adapted the sort of traditional writing style (and have been told like so a lot of times) with lengthy chapters and mouthful of descriptions. i thought that if i divide it, I'd be well on my way past 60chaps, but i can't get myself to shorten them ð i admit that it needs a little time for the story to sink into the reader since its rather slow-paced. So i hope that whoever reads it would have the patience to be with the characters through their journey â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž
Yes, I noticed that too. It's my first time using this platform and was surprised by the number of chapters ð Still, thank you for reading my story. It makes me happy to receive feedbacks since it lets me know that people are actually reading it ð and it's also nice to connect to readers like this 𥰠stay safe and healthy always!
MillionaireDaoist:I love old literature too, its okay ð it wasn't meant as criticism. I'm just telling you what books here tend to do. Believe it or not, 60+ would be good (I know its the same content and it sounds silly) ð§ but you do attract more readers with more chapters. But as the author you should do whatever feels right for you, I'll keep reading anyway ð¥°