So, I haven't read too much of it yet, but I can say so far is that you don't really get the feel of the background, I mean of course you know that its stronger than earth but how much.(Coming off of my knowledge of 3 chapters, maybe later it explains more) I also don't understand how if you are ruling an empire, you probably can destroy earth with a finger(cultivation?) and you want to gain trust by defeating a fox tribe? And why would they be on earth? (I know you destroy them inside out but foxes are more cunning than that) Wouldn't you need something better to gain their trust? The writing quality is pretty bad, don't mean it a harsh way, but I don't think they look over past chapters, it hurts your brain to look at. I love the idea on the synopsis, I feel like it has a lot of potential in that regard
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