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story pacing is extremly slow and have lot of unnecessary description. like how when he woke up,opening door,wearing shoes. It’s description is taking over 65% story.I think the author should changr this things or else everyone become bored of this

Rebirth: King to Superstar

Cruchymonster

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yes I also felt like that as I started to write the novel again recently. The novel before my hiatus is a bit slow paced. Now I am writing vol 3 and decided to change up with it