I canât handle the seriously poor grammar! That plus the rapid plot presentation where from the start everything gets thrown before the reader in the manner of someone upending the contents of their bag on your bedð«€ Itâs simply chaotic and feels like immature writing. A shame as the story synopsis sounded interesting.
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ãããAmrutaShinde95:thank uuu for giving your time to this story. I will try to improve this story & over all Grammer whenever I get time.