The MC is exactly as the author describes and isn't a complete buffon. The harem actually has peraonality and there's actual plot and world building. (As chaotic as it is) Overall if your looking for a novel to excite your heart for more and harem with actual depth added. Then read the novel and aupport the author!

I take my shameless review to warn that the novel is about collecting waifus everywhere, making a massive harem, manipulating feelings, making plans for everything (even breathing), making netori to other anime protagonists (hehe, stealing waifus is fun), and things like that ~ I won't always follow the original plot as my memory sucks and I will forget a lot of things so sorry if I screw up some characters or plots. Lastly, I don't make R18 content since I don't know how to do it. I'm sorry!</3 Anyway, I hope you enjoy it<3

Now I remember why I dislike your first novel. You ask me what this novel about : Well... Something like this. 30 percent of mc thinking about how shit his personality is. 30 percent of mc thinking what girls personality is. 30 percent of thinking about his future plans. 10 percent of actual actions or dialogs between characters. You see a problem here? Maina characters thought is 90 % narrated what happens in retrospective or bitching about girls/his own problems /his future plans. That's not a novel. That's fucking diary. Of bipolar main character. Why I call him bipolar? He doesn't actually comes to conclusions. Develop over times. He switches opinion. If at first he was against long term relationships. He then just accept it. Without actually liking shigure in that moment. Harem? He likes only shigure but started to make plans. Why and how? I don't know. He doesn't actually receive any stimulus to think that way. System quest doesn't actually give him anything noteworthy. He doesn't come to like any others girls. He just wants to make harem now. Great. That's not a character development, mate. That's an illness. Changing you mindset without any reason - is literally bipolarity. Of course before you need to bitch about it. Half a chapter, minimum. Of course. His constant bitching is what get me mad. In first chapters we see someone who have obvious flaws but have a strong character - now he just a bitch who afraid of anything. And like to bash himself and talk how evil he is and how evil he's plans. Without actually showing it. Perfecto, comrade. I don't if his promised character development would actually make it more tolerated. But 10 chapters in, and all I see is nagging . It's like swimming in hot pot that every time keeps rising temperature. It's painful.

First! I wish you good luck author. The fanfiction is great, the development and interaction between characters is amazing. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

One thing I love about this fanfiction is the emotional development of every character. The main character development is great. I love how he changes as the fanfiction progress. Also yanderes are the best!

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this is not a novel this is fckg diary,,this book only 1person pov monologue all the way

I'm just here for the "Yandere" tag........ ...............and for harem tag also... lol 😆

Are you an under age boy that idolizes people like that bald cockroach-looking dude that got arrested for human trafficking? Are you someone that thinks that a man showing any emotions that may be considered “soft” automatically makes that man a f*g? (Author’s words). Do you like reading about an MC that is completely psychotic with absolutely no redeeming qualities? Do you want to read chapters that are 95 percent monologue? Even later, after the author says he “learned and changed the format so you just have to get through the first 45 chapters” probably around 70 to 80 percent of the chapters are still the MC’s vomit inducing thoughts. Wanna read a harem where the only purpose of it is to have as many members as possible so a lot of the girls only get a summary from the MC “I like her body so I made her go through some horrendous events so that she gets traumatized and ends up depending on me ;) now she loves me, yipee”! Then this story is your braindead mind’s ultimate dream. Some words to the author. Hermanó perdón por ser tan brusco, yo asumo que creciste alrededor de una cultura similar como en la que yo crecí. En donde los hombres tienen metido en la cabeza ciertas ideas de machismo, y lo que significa ser un hombre. Si tu creaste el protagonista usando tu propia mentalidad, busca ayuda o trata de cultivar una mente mas aceptante porque este protagonista es absolutamente horroroso.