Review Detail of Chocobeast in See The Difference

its good start thou,ii ust find it hard to read, because of my shitty mond that want to scold the mc, his dream but not prepared? it's just in my mind you know that's why it's good story because i didn't expect that this will be clueless mc, not a serious one who study and become outstanding. Ye nice story keep up the goodwork.