REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author created this novel. Great world-building and narration surpassing mine. Splendid writing quality and fluency of narration. ADVICE None, the author was a better author and his work was something I have to learn to. Kudos!
Shaele
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