webnovel

Review Detail of SAGE in How I Slayed A Dragon

レビュー詳細

SAGE
SAGELv22yrSAGE

I didn't like this novel for many reasons, first, we don't even know the MC name, second, the world is so peaceful that I don't see how this novel can grow, third, you focus too much on characters that all we know about them their name and that means you focus on side characters

How I Slayed A Dragon

SlimeInSpace

Liked it!

いいね

返信2

SlimeInSpace
SlimeInSpace作者SlimeInSpace

Also, even though the story starts off peaceful, doesn't mean it'll be peaceful forever. Most stories have a peaceful start, then conflict occurs as time goes on. It's fine if you don't like my novel, I'm just writing for fun but I will think about what you said and try to improve my writing. Hope you find a better story

SlimeInSpace
SlimeInSpace作者SlimeInSpace

the first sentence of chapter one literally states his name is Anthony.... did you even read it?