I didn't like this novel for many reasons, first, we don't even know the MC name, second, the world is so peaceful that I don't see how this novel can grow, third, you focus too much on characters that all we know about them their name and that means you focus on side characters
SlimeInSpace
Liked it!
いいねAlso, even though the story starts off peaceful, doesn't mean it'll be peaceful forever. Most stories have a peaceful start, then conflict occurs as time goes on. It's fine if you don't like my novel, I'm just writing for fun but I will think about what you said and try to improve my writing. Hope you find a better story