Review Detail of AbsoluteDegeneracy in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

I have to say. . . this is hard to read. Especially at the beginning because this is as far as I go despite my OCD desire to finish what I have started. Some stories are cringy but they are like falling down a slope with an incline where you don't lose much momentum. This is so hard to read (at least in the beginning) where the slope of the reading is like hitting flat ground every time there is some trash writing which is every other paragraph. It stops the flow of the story every time I physically cringe and start scratching my face like a trashed junkie.