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Gavyn_MackLv43yrGavyn_Mack

honestly the story has potential. I like it, just the writing is bad and a few other things. if you want to know I can tell you author. other than that it can be a great book.

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Ryo_Ryuuga

Liked it!

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Ryo_Ryuuga作者Ryo_Ryuuga

thanks for that opinion.Honestly,Im still improved my writing.If you has any suggestion to improve what's I lacking in this novel.Then you could let me know

3yr