This Webnovel is a blast to read. The writing quality is a lot better than most Webnovels here. There are some minor grammar mistakes here and there, but that doesn't detract. The plot may seem to be a bit cliched- a reborn man in a medieval world, but that shouldn't deter you from reading. With all of that being said, there's a lot of good parts. The writing here is very descriptive, and the main character is truly fleshed. The other characters do have a lot of "screen time", too! And, already, we know who to root for and who to root against. The past life of the main character can be very relatable. Even though there is ten chapters, this is brimming with potential. Keep on working hard, and this book will bear good fruit. It truly deserves a 5 star.
TailsOfHope
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いいねThanks for your feedback! If possible, I'd love if you could highlight any grammatical errors you see, as (aside from the typical typos due to rushing to get chapters out) I'm very surprised to hear you found any at all. I try to stay diligent ensuring they don't happen. But, of course, we all make mistakes! No-one is perfect :) I'm always looking to improve though, and the idea that I've got grammatical issues scares me. Whether they be misplaced punctuation; wrong tense used in a sentence; overused adverbs, or prepositional phrases, or even comma splicing - I want to know to fix it.
TailsOfHope:Thanks for your feedback! If possible, I'd love if you could highlight any grammatical errors you see, as (aside from the typical typos due to rushing to get chapters out) I'm very surprised to hear you found any at all. I try to stay diligent ensuring they don't happen. But, of course, we all make mistakes! No-one is perfect :) I'm always looking to improve though, and the idea that I've got grammatical issues scares me. Whether they be misplaced punctuation; wrong tense used in a sentence; overused adverbs, or prepositional phrases, or even comma splicing - I want to know to fix it.
TailsOfHope:Any reason why this review isn't showing on my story? Sorry, new to Webnovel.