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Gaulix
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Everything people write about here, in a laudatory manner, raises serious doubts after reading this fanfiction. A superficial story, the main character does not cause any reaction at all, just a dude who is in every second fanfiction, and the characters surrounding him are just NPCs, from which there is no need in principle, remove them and the story will not change in any way.

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Dotencsure

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Mesuur
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Do you have some advice that can help the author? It's his first time writing so any advice is appreciated.