Review Detail of LordSputnik in Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor

Item: Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor
Rating: 3.6

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LordSputnikLv133yrLordSputnik

The Good: The world the author has constructed is excellent! The MC is at least well thought out and it is nice to see a family for once that is more than just an afterthought. The Bad: Why do you include a thank you chapter, it breaks immersion even more than the end of a chapter. The point of view changes every now and then from 3rd person omniscient to first person and back for no apparent reason, probably not intentional. The Neutral: I had a hard time following this for some reason. Overall though, I can't say much about it that is done poorly. My best advice I can think of would be to keep at it and you will improve across all aspects!

Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor

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LordSputnikLv13LordSputnik

No problem, when you delete it, that will let me know when to give it another go.

AmateurAuthor:Finally! I can find a time to fix the bad points in your comment. So, this review is no longer applicable. I will delete this review. Again, thank you for your honest feedback. It is really useful! :)

3yr

AmateurAuthor作者AmateurAuthor

Thank you for your review, critiques, and suggestions! It is really useful to me! I have just begun writing this first novel as a hobby at the beginning of this year to improve my English, and I was looking for something like this. Really appreciate it! 😊

3yr

AmateurAuthor作者AmateurAuthor

Finally! I can find a time to fix the bad points in your comment. So, this review is no longer applicable. I will delete this review. Again, thank you for your honest feedback. It is really useful! :)

3yr