Review Detail of EnderPL in Hitman's Multiverse Adventures

Writing quality is really good but there are still some mistakes. Update I don’t know so 4* Story development. Started really good and interesting but then it all went to shit. Author jumps all over the place and contradicts himself. In one chapter the person is dead or moving on just to be included in the conversation few chapters later. Story becomes boring as hell as probably even the author didn’t know what to write about. All the good, funny and interesting aspects of the story were cut out (like family relationships) and just disregarded after killing Valdy. World background is nothing new. Chapter design. Was really good at the beginning but then just gotcut out and forgotten.