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Item: Hell station: Limbo
Rating: 5

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nobody_2962Lv13yrnobody_2962

It is a good story with interesting characters the personality of each character are so different which makes this novel more fun to read ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Hell station: Limbo

Akichi

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Tensei_TaraLv2Tensei_Tara

hello, can you give me an advice of how to make your character likeable? because I wanna write a story for fun but I still want to do my best to it. thanks for advance:)

Akichi:Thank you, though I do believe I can do better, it is one of the things I wish to pass as a strong point, the main character not paying too much attention to some things and all that. Should also get better instead of worse as more and more characters appear and reappear.

3yr

Akichi作者Akichi

Thank you, though I do believe I can do better, it is one of the things I wish to pass as a strong point, the main character not paying too much attention to some things and all that. Should also get better instead of worse as more and more characters appear and reappear.

3yr