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Joshua_McGavran
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it is a good start but has a few things that the author needs to work on such as longer chapters and better world building but over all the story seems to be getting off to a good start.

The Spinning of Time

Hannah_McGavran

1の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね
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返事はありません。最初になろう!