Review Detail of Laziest_Pillow in Peak Level
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It is a little early to tell anything about the story. It is convoluted in its narrative and presentation of characters, most times it feels as if a whole paragraph or introduction is missing, and things happen too fast for you to keep track of events or what the characters are doing. The dialogue is messy in its delivery too, it doesn't feel natural, it is as if the characters were NPCs with set dialogue and little to no investment in said words besides speaking them. Overall, it can be better and I hope the author improves his story telling as he proceeds with the book.
Peak Level
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Hello, and Thank you for your Review, the explanation of characters will slowly be introduced in the later chapters, the dialogues are meant to be there to understood the situation they're in. The characters introduced are only 3 as of 6 chapters. The style of writing is completely different to how novels are usually written, the reason for confusion. It is read as Down to Down before the dialogue is stated the action will come first.