A couple of typos here and there but it doesn't disrupt my reading so i didn't really mind it. Marcus was really fun and I love how the author is also developing the side chars and not making them look like side dumps. Would love to see an improvement of writing quality though. Not sure if it's just me bc I read harry potter and books like that so yah
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