Review Detail of Yuri_is_Ntr in DxD : The Second Coming of Lust

Yeah,I am trying my best to be nice.So... yeah... I don't know what to say. If we talk about wishfufilment kind of novel with slice of life theme - it's decent,because author doesn't do anything horrible. like there is no ntr, or too much of simping. And that's already should be great...right? Unfortunately, it's doesn't some other elements like story or believable characters, and pacing is weird. Story arcs is very slow,but actions between characters (romance) is too fast. it's wouldn't be a problem if there wouldn't be so many girls. I all for a big harem,but give it's some time at least. You don't need to try feat every girl in every chapters. Some romance could take more time , some girls could have they own mini-arcs. Just try to pace it slower. Because I skipped like half chapters after 18 , because there was jus try cuddling and repeating of the same actions with girls without any actual development. And because of this problem characters suffer like a lot. Like most of mc actual character you could only see in first 5 chapters,then he becomes centre of attention of all girls , and don't have even enough time to talk. And because of that he doesn't actually have any character,most time he just doing everything to please girls. - that's kinda whole novel here. If someone was a bit iffy about first chapters when mc was cruel to issei and actually was a bit more dominant with girls /kinda аsshole - you don't need to worry,he is gentleman for sure. Not because that is his character,but because he doesn't have character...weird,but that's how it is.