It's a really interesting and capturing plot. I love how the first chapter is very emotion driven and is filled with angst which is really fun! I noticed a few error in tenses but as a fellow author I get it lol, we make mistakes. Overall it's very interesting good luck![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!