The first chapter is like a poem and it's pretty cool for an introduction. Just a reminder about the paragraphs are way too long and I suggest that you may cut some of them. That is my writing style before and I got tons of reviews about my writing quality so I revise my novel to improve. Keep up the work! ^_^
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