I read 2 chapters.No proper punctuation Mark's are placed,no proper full stops and capital letters.First know the basics then start writing.I didn't like the content.
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Thank you for the comment and @chhandamandal I think that you misunderstood and it's not like that [img=coins]
What did I misunderstand?
everything
I didn't misunderstand.You have written in a bad manner.It's your duty to improve grammar before writing story.
Thank you for clarification mam
Your most welcome.
Fidha_Zaara:Thank you for clarification mam
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Read my stories too.
Kindly not sure to read because I have to write mine too
This is why everything in your story has no inspired content.Your just writing useless content.
Fidha_Zaara:Kindly not sure to read because I have to write mine too