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HideousGrain
HideousGrain作者3yrHideousGrain

Show-off Author trying to figure out how to write good novels. With my first Novel [God´s Eyes] I want to let my creativity loose. I would love it to get support and much helpful criticmn! Thank you for reading the Novel, have a nice day, and stay healthy!! (>‿◠)✌

God´s Eyes

HideousGrain

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firelord49R
firelord49RLv11firelord49R

good book. do not stop writing. Write at least a few thousand chapters. good luck

Jozan
JozanLv2Jozan

well it's not showing off if it's true😂

Queen_Of_Alchemy
Queen_Of_AlchemyLv4Queen_Of_Alchemy

I. love. this. book!!!!! You must keep writting, it is amazing! In my opinion, the pace of the book is like.. perfect! I love how everything turns out and I can’t wait to see what’ll happen in chapters 100 or even 1000 😃😉 (please keep writting, im in luv with ur book)

Eueo
EueoLv10Eueo

romance?

gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

+1 romance ??

Eueo:romance?
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

romance ??

HideousGrain
HideousGrain作者HideousGrain

sub-romance plot

Eueo:romance?
Equinox_D
Equinox_DLv13Equinox_D

Romance?, Harem??

Thechoasfinder829
Thechoasfinder829Lv4Thechoasfinder829

Why does every one want romance?

GauravKumar
GauravKumarLv2GauravKumar

Is this a planned story? And I don't mean every single detail but just like the checkpoints/plot points. As a rough idea, how long do you think this work would be? And also, do you have a clear end to the story? (I just want to know what I'm getting into, no offense 😅)

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

power couple or harem? wanna know before i start this... pls

HideousGrain:sub-romance plot
Nesamone
NesamoneLv5Nesamone

while the story is quite interesting and I would rate 9/10, the grammar is kinda destroying the enjoyment of reading this novel. and if I'm right few days ago there was an notification that chapters are being re-edit, but it feels like nothing was changed grammar wise

Nesamone
NesamoneLv5Nesamone

tho even if grammar is a bit bad, I'm still gonna keep reading cause I want to see how the story goes... xd

Nesamone:while the story is quite interesting and I would rate 9/10, the grammar is kinda destroying the enjoyment of reading this novel. and if I'm right few days ago there was an notification that chapters are being re-edit, but it feels like nothing was changed grammar wise
HideousGrain
HideousGrain作者HideousGrain

There are a few checkpoints for this story, but I like to think about the plot while writing. About the number of chapters...I don´t know tbh, but I think there will be more than 700 but less than 1200... But it´s not something I can say for sure tho

GauravKumar:Is this a planned story? And I don't mean every single detail but just like the checkpoints/plot points. As a rough idea, how long do you think this work would be? And also, do you have a clear end to the story? (I just want to know what I'm getting into, no offense 😅)
HideousGrain
HideousGrain作者HideousGrain

Dunno

Nikhil_Chand:power couple or harem? wanna know before i start this... pls
HideousGrain
HideousGrain作者HideousGrain

Announcing that I´ll re-edit everything was probably not so smart, considering that I don´t really have much time xd. I already saw that you wrote many comments to show me my mistakes. Thanks for this, I appreciate it because it makes everything much easier for me and less time-consuming.

Nesamone:tho even if grammar is a bit bad, I'm still gonna keep reading cause I want to see how the story goes... xd
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

if author says this then....

HideousGrain:Dunno