The story has its own interesting twist. It has an intriguing main character and a good plot. In the few chapters i read, the story has a good potential. However, I would suggest working on the sentence structure and some grammar issues to make it more captivating and to improve your storytelling. Keep writing.
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!