Review Detail of ILLYAchan in Demoniac

The story has a good plot that will bring readers in. The main character and the world he is in seems interesting. I can see that there are many more to tell in this hidden gem story. The author is currently editing it so I hope it will improve more as some events are not described clearly and I suggest that some dialogues be separated from the paragraphs as I find it too long and I am lost from what I'm reading. (Although it's just my advice, it's up to you author!) Overall, the story will be a good novel to read in one's free time. Keep the good work author!