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Sorry to hear that, but do people, like you, really try to avoid cultivation? But having your opinion on the board, it does make me want to give the MC the iron skin, considering the ki could be replaced with magic instead. So, thank you for your opinion.

That and also MC giving powers and immortality to all the minions he has . The cool thing about having minions in the zombie apocalipse is for them to die in battle. It's ok to have some characters who pop up because they made friends with the MC or something but Immortality should never have been so cheap to get. I also think that you should have stopped once you had Jhon Wick . You could have asked for all his money and to get as many weapons as possible and maybe some minions. But you had to add so many characters that got boring. We love Jhon wick but at least me I don't give two shts about the rest of the movie characters. Also WHY are you saying that the MC would gladly die for his PEOPLE? They are disposable minions, no one cares and even if Jhon and his wife die again it should be easy to re-summon them so no one cares if they die.

--""" Sorry to hear that, but do people, like you, really try to avoid cultivation? """ YES, I can guarantee you I tried already to read many cultivation novels ( when I say many I mean more than 8 different novels and all of them ... I regret with all my heart to have ever read them. The way that the MC or any other person speak are so rude, unpolite, and even so they have a werid wait of speaking like they're the emperor or something or the king of sht. I just HATE with all my heart that shtty way of talking . Many of the novels I read would have been acceptable if they talked like normal people and not like a Bollywood parody movie.

This review is just a stupid rant about disliking cultivation and this is not even a proper review, i don't understand why people automatically just rates a fanfic or a novel 1 star because it has cultivation, romance, harem and other stuff, instead of giving an actual review. 90% of people who review in novels or fanfics are people who either rants and complain as to why cultivation is involve or why it is about cultivation, the same goes to other novel or fanfic genres.

In this fanfic, it is more truthfully similar to real life, where he cares about those who are ready to do anything for him, John and the others admitted loyalty themselves and not a call, and if, as you say, they are just minions and their life is worthless, they can be call again then you are disgusting to me.

not a problem pal . I think this in a perspective of a more realistic " isekai+god powers " . Yes Jhon and her wife are important and immortality is ok to be given but remember that MC can revive them and even make them younger so he could easy control their " immortality " . And yes, I might be disgusting as I would not care for the rest of the minion's death and what ? Only in the case of them being important for the MC mentally . They are killers , they know the risks and MC should as well , he killed people and for a second he though about them but then he forgots. Also remember he is willing to risk his powers and life for killers so you need to see it from both sides.

I personally think that you are exaggerating, the problem is not the cultivation, but the young masters and villains appearing only to be beaten by the MC every moment. In fact, his review only attracted me to read the novel, after all it is relatively rare a novel where the author uses the Chinese cultivation system.

I understand that you don't like the cultivation system, but your review is absurd. The Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design and World Background categories are there to prevent people from simply giving 1 star for not liking the mc or the world background. It is this type of revision that the author should delete to preserve his novel. If you are a respectable reader, I sincerely hope you can delete and redo your review by giving the correct number of stars for each category.

You spoke everything with power comes arrogance, more only when you have absolute power, let's put the cultivation level of 1-10, 9 and a nothing, and a garbage it's not better than anyone, because a level 10 can come and rape your mind and all your family and it can't do anything, except get excited kkk. Understand? so that's why this shit is so ridiculous and annoying. (google translator)

And that is not the basis of the story? or there are many young masters or there are some antagonists (the great majority and a young master too.) with plot armor that appears in chapter 2 and only dies in 1760 and the novel ends in 1761. (google translator)

not really, one thing is not related to the other, although they are often seen together, there are cultivation novels with few or no young masters. Cultivation chat group is an example of a cultivation novel with no young master.

I can see you guys want me to delete this evaluation vor a few reasons so I'll give my reasons on why I gave this evaluation. 1. I tried many times to read chinese cultivation novels and fortunately I got to somehow like 1 of those many ( Great demon King .. still I got bored after 900 episodes) . The rest of them are too weird, have no solid arguments on why he gets the powers. Most of the Mc in cultivation make up an excuse that they can become gods because they eat some vegetables that are " magic " ..... poor plot, and weak excuses on how they'll become " powerful ". 2: The way of talking: They speak in such a weird maner . " this king of myself " , " you dare to talk to me ? dare to talk to Shun Shan Shonshu?? then you must die " and sht like that . This is not how normal people speak and gives me the creeps.. Even if this novel doesn't have it I generalize at the end and due to my horrible experience with this general way of being I can no longer continue reading cultivation . 3: Killing, raping and much more: I had many unpleasant experience on cultivation where MC think that because they are such a powerful " master... " they can robb , kill or rape any person they want without any excuse. I accept those in dark novels but in chinese cultivation they do it in a super weird way.. 4: Unrealistic human behaviour : Mc said he will gladly die if that saved the lives of his minions . I think that the author even mentioned this in a way that the MC means he will die for ANY and ALL his minions. I had this discussion before but.. he can FKING REVIVE THEM! why does it matter if they die for an enemy or something , he can always call them back .... if he dies then the fun is over, if the minions die no one cares. Even if it's Jhon Wick , you are taking all the fun of a zombie apocalipse... If you have such a infrastructure from the begining it ruins the " survival " fun . It's good to be prepared and even if zombies evolve but this is just absurd. I gave a 1 in all because I think as a whole evaluation. I don't think is okay to evaluate good just because the author updates quick. If the novel is bad for me I'm not giving a 4 but a 1 . There are still more reasons but it's very late and I'm tired.