Review Detail of TIm in SIERRA GAMES

Heyo. It me the author. I want to let you guys know that this is my first novel published and typed. Ever since I moved to America, This is my first reborn novel and also a story that sounds bloody. It just the first and first to publish. So Please write your opinion in the comment section while reading the novel. Help me and tell me if you were okay with it. Neither needs improvement or not. THANKS. Don’t be afraid to point out mistakes.