Pros Good story idea. The mc doesnt shy away from the “dark” . Cons The mc is extremely childish. The mc has no spine at all. The mcs parents(mainly has to do with the fact that the mc has no spine to stand up to them) No character development at all, after 20 orso chapters there where barely any words exchanged, we do not even know what the characters look like and they just pop up out of nowhere like theyve known eachother since forever. The story is told more like a summary than a story. The wishes, he gets 6 but might aswell have non, outside of great magic power and memory wich couldve been achieved with magic his other wishes where rather pointless and makes him come across like a conplete downer. And did i already mention the relationship between him and his parents? ...
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