Review Detail of beloved_writer in The History of the Human Heart

I think the way you narrate your story and the word choice you use is very beautiful. From the very first section, I was captivated. As you mentioned in your synopsis, your work is poetic. However, I do wish some of the paragraphs were broken up into smaller ones 😅. It can get quite overwhelming reading such a large blurb of words. But overall, I’m enjoying this piece!