There are alot of problems with grammar and punctuation. In the first chapter alone, the use of periods and commas are missed. Is the author a native English speaker? If not i suggest to brush up on capitalization and the usage of nouns and pronouns. Cool idea otherwise and good luck!
SivaTheGreat
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いいねThen i recommend editing them, the beginning is extremely important for people to decide if they wanna read this any longer. (And how they rate this)
SivaTheGreat:Actually, English is not my native and this is actually my first novel. So, the initial chapters may have poor grammer in a few places. Anyways, thanks for your encouragement and I am glad that you at least liked the concept.
SivaTheGreat:Actually, English is not my native and this is actually my first novel. So, the initial chapters may have poor grammer in a few places. Anyways, thanks for your encouragement and I am glad that you at least liked the concept.
Kokushibou:Then i recommend editing them, the beginning is extremely important for people to decide if they wanna read this any longer. (And how they rate this)