Wishing you luck! The competition is tough. I can only say is that, it is worth it of my time reading this story of yours. Your entry is light and filled with a mixture of adventure, friendship and action. Looking forward to how things will develop. Other concern is, do not drag your plot for too long. 1-5 chapters are standard for plot lines but it is okay to see the effort to improve here. Give this a try, everyone! Hoping the best for this story.
madskie00017
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