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2021-01-09 06:21

The writing quality is great, but i'm not so sure about the story development as the MC getting OP to early, which typically doesn't bode well for later chapters .. but that only apply if it is a typical system story. It would be a pleasant surprise if the story is going an original route, but until then i think 3.5 stars is a fair rating.

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Mujunel_the_Mystic
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I can promise that the story is going with an original route---different from most system and sports stories. I'm not writing about an under dog (at least in skill) rising through the ranks---but on how the MC becomes a G.O.A.T. I have an outline for the growth of the player until the later stages of the book. Keep reading and you'll be surprised. Thanks for the review.

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