This story is a good idea but the main character has many name because the author change the name at each sentence and this is very tiresome to read. What´s more the ninjutsu spelling is wrong for example is « Katon » and no « Cato ». These errors do not allow to immerse ourselves in the story.
Gunitlo
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!