Review Detail of Neqtrix in Shane Crowfeather: A Rogue's Tale
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Ok since no one had the gals to write a review, allow me to do it. Ok, honestly I've only read the first chapter but 1 author please write shorter paragraphs, it is easier to read that way 2 the action was really packed but you didn't properly elaborate the intense feelings the MC was going through. 3 even with that the way the author is writing the surroundings is incredibly detailed
Shane Crowfeather: A Rogue's Tale
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Thank you very much, I try to work them out into smaller paragraphs yet they somehow end up long page-sized pieces, I will also try to elaborate more on the MC's feelings as best I can. I also thank you for noticing the details of the surroundings, in most fantasy movies, shows, and books the details of surroundings is important, at least to me. Thank you very much for your comment, I will do my best to improve to make this a more interesting story.